Students should be tought academic knowledge so that they can pass exams,and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be tought. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter in regards to the demolition of a historical building near to my resident. it is a 200-year-old premise with beauties of ancient time carved on it. I suggest to please try and preserve the establishment so that our coming generation can see the art from our
history
. we are
also
ready to provide you with any possible support in terms of fundraising, etc. to save the building. The building is a 200-year-old establishment and is one of the oldest in the
city
.
Moreover
, it is built with an ancient architectural plan and is a perfect example of the enriched
history
of the
city
. The premises can be kept as a monument of ancestral generation and it will surely enrich the ethnicity of the
city
. we can add the building in the list of historical monument of the
city
and can be added into the
history
lessons at the schools. In future, the schools can
also
plan a tour for its students to visit the building and learn about our
history
. I have
also
, spoken with many people about
this
thought of mine, and they have
also
agreed to pay a monthly fee to preserve
this
cultural display. All the individuals of the
city
can pay a minimal fee and that can be deducted from their monthly maintenance bill for the maintenance for the building. I look forward to your support reply. Your's faithfully, Sweta
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