You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain what is wrong with the furniture • say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................., You should write at least 150 words.

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Thompson, My name is Liz, my parents and I have just moved to your apartment on Fifth Avenue. I’m writing
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letter to address some issues that we have been facing with its furniture since we arrived.
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, the bed in the main suite is broken, which could have been a very serious problem, considering that my parents are elderly and have several spinal problems.
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, the glass of the dining room table is broken at one end, leaving a sharp edge that can eventually cause an accident. We are very interested in continuing to live here as we like the location and the neighbourhood,
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, taking into consideration that we pay a high rent, above the average of the properties in the vicinity, I would like you to consider replacing the mentioned items as soon as possible, or that unless you write us back giving authorization for us to buy similar items,
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I would buy the stuff tomorrow and the amount paid could be deducted on the
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rent, upon presentation of the receipt, if you prefer. Thank you in advance and I hope to hear from you soon, Yours faithfully, Liz Gills
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear
  • I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
  • regarding
  • the condition
  • furniture
  • belongings
  • for instance
  • damaged
  • broken
  • worn-out
  • appliance
  • household items
  • it is unacceptable
  • inconvenient
  • inhabitable
  • affecting
  • negatively
  • urgent attention
  • replacement
  • repair
  • resolve
  • maintenance
  • prompt response
  • Thank you for your attention
  • Yours sincerely
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