Dear
Mr.
Thompson,
My name is Liz, my parents and I have just moved to your apartment on Fifth Avenue.
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letter to address some issues that we have been facing with its furniture since we arrived. Linking Words
First
, the bed in the main suite is broken, which could have been a very serious problem, considering that my parents are elderly and have several spinal problems. Linking Words
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, the glass of the dining room table is broken at one end, leaving a sharp edge that can eventually cause an accident.
We are very interested in continuing to live here as we like the location and the neighbourhood, Linking Words
however
, taking into consideration that we pay a high rent, above the average of the properties in the vicinity, I would like you to consider replacing the mentioned items as soon as possible, or that unless you write us back giving authorization for us to buy similar items, Linking Words
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I would buy the stuff tomorrow and the amount paid could be deducted on the Linking Words
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rent, upon presentation of the receipt, if you prefer.
Thank you in advance and I hope to hear from you soon,
Yours faithfully,
Liz GillsLinking Words
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