Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Many parents indeed spend a huge amount of money buying toys and electronic gadgets for their toddlers. While I accept that these toys can sometimes have a positive effect on the children, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.
To begin
with, the main benefit of buying numerous gadgets is that they enhance learning skills and understanding. Parents believe that by playing with interactive games, their teen can learn while playing. Linking Words
That is
to say, with the advancement of technologies, there are a plethora of toys available in the market which can help their kids to interact and learn. Linking Words
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such
as scramble and word count, helps children to improve vocabulary as well as learning new ideas. Linking Words
In addition
to that, if a youth has a choice in toys, they can learn the art of sharing with others which can be very helpful in the latter part of their life.
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Conversely
, a large number of toys can make a child addicted to that. Linking Words
This
can lead to many serious problems for the children Linking Words
such
as less interaction with other kids. Linking Words
As a result
, the child can become socially awkward. Linking Words
Moreover
, teenagers can become stubborn and will not understand the importance of things, and because of that, they can start breaking and losing toys deliberately, as they know that their parents will buy them more toys. Linking Words
Therefore
, parents need to keep an eye on their juvenile and only provide them with things if that's a necessity.
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although
there are some benefits of providing abundant toys to the adolescent, I believe that it can harm the child as an excessive fondness for toys can lessen a child’s social interaction and skills.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...