Some people think that music plays an important role in society. Others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Songs,

chores

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and melodies

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been part of the human's culture. All pleasure gifts related to the

music

subject which is one the most ancient artistic human's expression says many people.

By contrast

, others argue that

music

is another way of entertainment and cheerful.

this

essay will discuss the reasons why

music

has a relevant role

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many nations across the world and what are the foundations of people says that

music

is just hobbies. In my view, I think that

music

is one the most sublime

artistics

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artistic

expression because can represent people's emotions and most important can help people as a therapy.

Music

play

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a paramount role in society express feelings, emotions , traditions, values

also

the history of a specific country.

Besides

,

medicine

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professionals use

music

on other aspects because they believe that

music

has many benefits of human's health.

For example

, some children hospitals use

music

as

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ethod of therapy. It is proved that

music

can calm mood and improve

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panic

attacks. For

that doctors

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include instruments and radios in the surgery rooms. People listening

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music

in

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everywhere. In the

last

decades,

enterteinment

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entertainment

companies

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made billion of money through

of

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festivals, concerts,

theaters

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theatres

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and movies because business companies know that

music

is crucial to connect people. Indeed, movies and series

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been

succesful

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successful

because it soundtracks involve different songs or sounds that people feel familiar and closer. the

disney

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movie call Coco is the perfect representation for that. the plot of the movie is interesting and had

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emotion story ,

however

, the story

take

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more power through of songs that the director presents.

Music

has

being

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considered an

entertaiment

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entertainment

manner over the years. In conclusion,

music

has been fundamental in

the

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human's history. Differents kinds of type of

music

has

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an

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paramount meaning in population, a simply

melodie

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melody

Melodie

melodies

or lyrics can be touch hearts and minds. In order to connect people with their emotions and feelings,

music

represen

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represent

At the same time, entertainment companies

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introduce

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music

in festivals, concert and tv shows in a manner to connect people and make money because they know that

music

move people. In my view,

music

is a

poweful

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powerful

art expression for two main

reason

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;

First

of all,

music

inspired people to do something because lyrics and sounds can connect people with their feelings and emotions.

Secondly

,

music

work better than take

a

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medicine, It is proved that

music

can change your mood and

also

your energy and that

its

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increadible

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incredible

.