Write about the following topic: Many people join distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In a digitalization world. Many people are like to used distance -learning programmes, which allows people to learn from home.

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hysical school. Many people believe that does it might lose some advantages by not attending colleges.

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positively think that yes, attending university has a more useful

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virtual class.

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, The physically attending school get change to make a bond with friends and professors. That gives chance to gives extra

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, many people do not show their expression with a professor like

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do not understand or I need a more detail explanation.To overcome with

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people are seeking help from a friend and their share idea and

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, some professors are identified, the student weakness and they can strongly push the student to improve it,

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not possible in a virtual class.

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, In college students are connected with many departments and even though there not connect with them, they can find good information about it. The biggest boon of college and university, they do have practical labs. Which is give you real ground

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we are getting information that the light has 7 different colours of rays. which give us to see

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ctual world, due to every ray has

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ifferent reflection rate. How we can prove

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some angle and put light on it. It will split into 7 colours.

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nternet.

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is only you can see, but when it performed physically, it would give extra information. how to placed it, where to placed, which angle work. In a nutshell, Virtual classes are good to gain

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ntire world, but it might not fill

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when attending class. It would be great if

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in future, it has

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usion of both to maximize the

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to the people.