You had to cancel a meeting with a friend. Write a letter to him/her, in your letter - Apologise for cancelling the meeting - Explain why you couldn't be there - Suggest an alternative day when you could meet
Dear Melih,
I am writing to apologise for cancelling the meeting that we organized
last
week. I want to emphasize that my family suddenly came to town so I had no chance to leave them alone. As you know, my father has been a heart problem for two years. Therefore
, someone is always with him in case.
Additionally
, that day we arranged for a babysitter who is a stranger to us but she could not come to our house because she had a disease. In other words
, we could not come that day because everything went badly.
Secondly
, I strongly want to attend the meeting, I haven’t seen you for ages and I missed you very much. However
, the conditions did not allow the meeting, as for
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also
very sad about this
problem. We suggest an alternative day for the meeting, if you are available next Monday, we could
be grateful. I know you are angry with us but we want to fix all the situations and will write new stories for you.
If there is any opportunity to feel you well again, please do not close yourself to me. I will make things better again as soon as possible.
Take care of yourself.
Kind regards,
Salih Zeki KöniCorrect your spelling
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The logical structure of your letter can be improved by arranging information and ideas more coherently.
coherence cohesion
It's good to have separate paragraphs dedicated to apologising, explaining, and suggesting an alternative. Make sure each paragraph elaborates on one main idea to maintain coherence.
task achievement
You have addressed all the bullet points, but the explanations provided could be clearer and more concise. Work on fully developing each part of the task with relevant details.
task achievement
Maintain a consistently polite tone throughout the letter and ensure that your choice of phrases appropriately reflects the formality of the situation.