You had to cancel a meeting with a friend. Write a letter to him/her, in your letter - Apologise for cancelling the meeting - Explain why you couldn't be there - Suggest an alternative day when you could meet

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Dear Melih, I am writing to apologise for cancelling the meeting that we organized

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week. I want to emphasize that my family suddenly came to town so I had no chance to leave them alone. As you know, my father has been a heart problem for two years.

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, someone is always with him in case.

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, that day we arranged for a babysitter who is a stranger to us but she could not come to our house because she had a disease.

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, we could not come that day because everything went badly.

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, I strongly want to attend the meeting, I haven’t seen you for ages and I missed you very much.

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, the conditions did not allow the meeting,

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very sad about

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problem. We suggest an alternative day for the meeting, if you are available next Monday, we

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be grateful. I know you are angry with us but we want to fix all the situations and will write new stories for you. If there is any opportunity to feel you well again, please do not close yourself to me. I will make things better again as soon as possible. Take care of yourself. Kind regards, Salih Zeki Köni

salihzekikoniFri Jan 12 2024

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Improvement Suggestions

coherence cohesion

Ensure that the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The logical structure of your letter can be improved by arranging information and ideas more coherently.

coherence cohesion

It's good to have separate paragraphs dedicated to apologising, explaining, and suggesting an alternative. Make sure each paragraph elaborates on one main idea to maintain coherence.

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You have addressed all the bullet points, but the explanations provided could be clearer and more concise. Work on fully developing each part of the task with relevant details.

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Maintain a consistently polite tone throughout the letter and ensure that your choice of phrases appropriately reflects the formality of the situation.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

212 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Apologies, Regretfully, Unforeseen, Unavoidable, Commitment, Inconvenience, Remorseful
Reschedule, Propose, Flexibility, Accommodate, Enthusiasm
Looking forward, Sincerely, Best regards, Warm wishes, Catch up, Make it up to you, Make amends

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You had to cancel a meeting with a friend. Write a letter to him/her, in your letter - Apologise for cancelling the meeting - Explain why you couldn't be there - Suggest an alternative day when you could meet

Improvement Suggestions

Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be overcome?

For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and math. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extend do you agree?

Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are the solutions?

Waste disposal presents increasing problems, especially in urban areas. What do you think are the causes? Give some suggestion to the government and individuals on how to reduce the amount of rubbish.