Some argue that what most impacts a child’s future life is their experiences before starting school while others think experiences as a teenager are more influential. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

People have different views about the ages of most implications for a child’s development in the long run. While a successful life of a human is a lifelong process of physical, behavioural, cognitive, and emotional growth, I am
also
convinced that from early childhood to adolescence is a crucial time where development changes are happening that can have profound and lasting consequences for a child’s future.
To begin
with, children can greatly acquire and enrich from fundamental knowledge to basic skills from homeschooling provided by their parents and grandparents as well.
Firstly
, children before starting a school keep at home under the supervision of their parents and grandparents with unconditional love can help children gain valuable life lessons, whether it is to appreciate the meaningful value of a happy family or to correct their behaviours promptly.
This
means that
such
lessons and knowledge could allow them to develop their mental well-being and help them to become well-mannered and family-oriented individuals at an early age, which is one of contributing factors to forming a successful child in the long run.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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