In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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By developing technology of the internet, the printed matters

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as newspapers or books tend to be less popular rather than online contents. Some people worry about

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situation as the online contents, which is easily accessible, will generate a harmful effect on the industry of printed matters. Meanwhile, I disagree with the people, having

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negative view on them. It is because many people still find the printed things of analogue style.

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, It is no doubt that people already get used to living with the contents on the internet from screen-based devices. Compared to 20 years ago, most people generally use portable devices

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as laptop, smartphones, and even tablets. As many global enterprises have been focusing on developing the

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brand-new mobile screen-based devices, lots of applications on those devices have been created, too. Many of them have provided readable contents for online news, e-books, and web-zines.

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, people could become more comfortable to come across diverse information for the world-wide issues in

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fast and busy society.

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, all the information is untouchable and virtualized data. Some people, who love analogue things, are willing to stay away from those virtual online readable things. Including me, the analogue-lovers still find the paper books and magazines in the book store, even though they order books from the online book store. The reason why they keep buying the printed matters is more focused on physical feeling from the actual materials rather than the reading contents and pieces of information. They prefer to feel the texture of the paper and see the ink printed alphabet and pictures on the paper, not on the screen of electronic devices. To conclude, I respect the people, worrying about the extinction of printed newspapers or books for the online readable ones.

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, after all, the printed things will not die out in the future as long as the analogue-lovers are alive. By developing technology of the internet, the printed matters

such

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as newspapers or books tend to be less popular rather than online contents. Some people worry about

this

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situation as the online contents, which is easily accessible, will generate a harmful effect on the industry of printed matters. Meanwhile, I disagree with the people, having

the

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negative view on them. It is because many people still find the printed things of analogue style.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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393 words

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convenience
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cultural value
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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

The plans show how a coastal land has developed into a coastal park.

Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Athers believes that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think governments should act to change the way people live so that they live a healthy life. Others, however, feel people should be free to live as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With an increasing population communicating via internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become the thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?

STUDENTS SHOULD PAY THE FULL COST OF THEIR OWN STUDY, BECAUSE UNIVERSITY EDUCATION BENEFITS INDIVIDUALS RATHER THAN SOCIETY. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?