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Many people believe that every individual is responsible for his/her own healthy lifestyle. Others believe that government should take care of it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #lifestyle #government #care
The line graph illustrates the total
number
 of visits in thousands to
two
 new music websites of
rapira
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rapier
rapine
 15 days With one 20,000 views the pop parade was the most visited site between the
two
 on
day
 one it maintained the same
number
 of viewers till
day
 three
however
 started declining steadily each
day
 with some little ups and downs to 40,000 visitors on 9th
day
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, on the other hand,
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on the other hand
 the Music Choice remained
number
 of visitors almost remained same between 20,000 and 40,000 till
day
 11 except for once on
day
 3 From
day
 nine hits to the
properate
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property
propagate
operate
 rose deeply to about 1:50 thousand on
day
 11
then
 it declined for
two
 days and again skyrocketed to around 0.17 million whereas the Music Choice overtook the properate on Thursday with approx 120,000 people visited it and remained almost same for
two
 days and had a decrease in
number
 on final
day
however
 sorry overall both sides improved in its numbers of viewers when compared to 1st
day
 with the Papa red being the most preferred on most of the days
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