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Some say that advertisements of toys and snacks have a huge impact on children and their parents, and therefore advertising to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your own opinion.

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The line graph illustrates the total number of visits in thousands to
two
 new music websites over a period of 15 days . With 120,000 views the pop parade was the most visited site between the
two
 on
day
 1. It maintained the same number of viewers till
day
 three,
however
, started declining steadily each
day
 with some little ups and downs to 40,000 visitors on 9th
day
.
On the other hand
,for the Music Choice number of visitors almost remained the same between 20,000 and 40,000 till
day
 11, except for once on 3rd
day
. From
day
 9 hits to the Pop Parade rose steeply to about 150 thousand on
day
 11,
then
 it declined for
two
 days and again skyrocketed to around 0.17 million, whereas, the Music Choice overtook the Pop Parade on 12th
day
 with approx 120,000 people visited it and remained almost same for
two
 days and had a decrease in the figure on the final
day
. Overall, both sides improved in their total viewers when compared to 1st
day
 with the Pop Parade being the most preferred one on most of the days.
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