Some people believe that the fittest and strongest players and teams are always successful. While others believe that success depends on mental ability. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is believed by few people that the healthiest and strongest
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and sporting teams always taste success whereas
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on the contrary
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believe that success depends on
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ental ability of
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the
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athlete
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views and I will put forth my opinion at the end of the essay. It is very true that an athlete or a
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trongest and
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members. Domination of stronger teams in all types of sports is not something new. It has become very simple for cricket and football fans to predict the outcome of a cricket match between Australia and Zimbabwe or a football match between Germany and Turkey. The obvious answer we will get to hear from fans
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Australia and Germany. The reasons for victory fans will give is "we had the better players ". Here what is meant by a better player means the fitter and the stronger player. But
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do not solely agree with
this
idea. I very much believe that along with good
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fitness
it is of utmost importance to have a good mental strength as well.
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many, I am someone looking forward
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surprises, and these surprises provided by the
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underdogs. Only the underdogs with strong mental ability are capable of
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providing pets
providing upsets
in
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competitive world. Talking about surprises only one story strikes my mind the most, that of '1983 Cricket World Cup' where India lifted their
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World Cup. It is
such
an inspiring story demonstrating the positive mindset with which the Indian players played a led the
team
to greatness. When India entered into the 1983 World Cup they weren't considered to be a threat to the mighty and
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players of West Indies and
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ustralian
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. Though all great i.e. the stronger and fitter players belonged to the West Indies, Australia and England national teams it was India who managed to stun the entire world at that time. The secret behind the occurring of
this
miracle is the Indian players showed good mental temperament. I personally feel an ideal
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air amount of everything i.e. fitness, strength and mental ability. Another wonderful example would be of the Jamaican running legend Usain Bolt. I think it is fair enough to conclude that in anything and everything one does it is very important to maintain balance among all components.
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