In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Population ageing is one of the major intricate issues in many countries in the world.
This
is growing very rapidly in Asia countries
such
as India,China and so on. Do we require to pay their
healthcare
providers in the future?
This
essay will provide reasons and examples of
this
.
To begin
with, People in the world facing stressful life which leads to older very quickly.
This
is because they are not doing any exercise, yoga to overcome
this
stressful life.
Besides
, they are consuming fast food every day to make their health worsen.
Although
they knew very well about fast food affect their health, they are consuming it. Nowadays, People in the country do not eat fresh fruits, vegetables to keep their immune system very strong.
For instance
, In India, fast food shops
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have
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been opened very rapidly in front of the office to make more money.
Hence
the people often going to the hospital and consuming medicines. Medicines cure the disease and
also
have some side effects by consuming
this
.
Moreover
, Senior citizens already getting
healthcare
scheme from the
government
. A portion of people in the society already urged to provide more
healthcare
schemes from the
government
.
This
will definitely become more rapidly in the near future.
Hence
the
government
should be prepared to provide the
healthcare
provisions for their people.
In addition
, the
government
should
also
create an awareness program about
this
. Not only from the
government
but
also
this
is required from the employer should take care of their employees. In conclusion, I agree that population ageing is a major issue and growing very rapidly in the world. We need to consider the national population and plan to provide
healthcare
provisions for their people in the upcoming days.
Also
, the
government
and the organisation should take their respective steps to reduce
this
issue.
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