Some people think that nuclear energy is better than other sources of power for meeting ever-increasing global needs. To what extent do you agree?

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The growth in the world's population and economy and rapid urbanization results in a substantial increase in
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demand. It is believed that nuclear
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would meet the world's consumption;
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, I would argue that using renewable resources is a better option. On the one hand, there are several reasons why people think that it is better to use nuclear
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. The
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one is that nuclear
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could provide stable, while the supply of renewable
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as solar
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or wind
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depends on weather condition which
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sometime
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unpredictable.
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, weather changing can detrimental to renewable
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generation. Another advantage is that setting up a nuclear
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factory
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requires
a small area, while the amount of space for
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olar
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system is much larger.
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, I strongly believe that alternative
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as solar
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is a
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better
option for society.
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, radioactive waste eliminated into electricity generation using
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nuclear
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could cause serious damage to the
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environment
and people’s health;
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, the accident happened in Fukushima in Japan several decades ago is a typical case.
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, the ecosystem in affected areas
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, thousands of people died through the evacuation procedure and after the disaster due to disease caused by radiation exposure.
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, I believe that renewable
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like solar
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or wind
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are much safer because they produce zone radioactive materials.Exposure to these materials can lead to
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fatal
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as cancer.
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, thanks to technological
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, the supply of renewable resources
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become more stable and the price is more reasonable.
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, I think that in
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future
nenewable
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renewable
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stations could make enough
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to, meet the growing global demands. In conclusion,
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using nuclear
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is advantageous in some ways,
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think that we should use renewable
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due to the positive impact on protecting
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nvironment
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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