With the pressures on today’s young people to succeed academically, some people believe that non-academic subjects at school (eg: physical education and cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays there is increasing pressure on juveniles to have grand success in education, keeping
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in mind, some people think of omitting the extracurricular activities. The main reason for thinking of
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is so that pupils could concentrate on educational content
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as maths and science. I do not agree with
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opinion because
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stays in optimum condition by doing exercise, so these non-academic subjects help in maintaining good
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. It is the fact that if the academic score is poor, there is a high chance of staying unemployed unless one really has a good family business.
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is the main reason for parents to think on academic scores to be excellent.
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, parents
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think that non-educational topics
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as sports and culinary skills are unnecessarily occupying the bandwidth of students.
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, in some schools, they teach how to make Russian food as vocational subjects and points gained in it are used positively for an overall score. So students put a lot of efforts in
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cooking classes and they end up losing time and fail in studying for maths and science.
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, the academic score for which employers are giving utmost importance gets lowered. But unless a child does physical activity,
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might deteriorate. So according to me at least 20
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of efforts should be given to non-studious topics
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as physical training. As a contrary, if any student exceeds the expectations in cooking or sports, that can be a great opportunity to take part in the Olympics or to become a chef as a career. Topmost achievers in
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non-academics do earn
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ot of money and become famous.
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chances are rare, one still should encourage to be part of physical activities to have a healthy mind and body. I have seen examples of academic toppers who are having
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challenges
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as often approaching hospitals and under medications. To sum up, there should be consideration of physical activities and vocational subjects apart from academics, so that students will stay healthy and wise. Parents should not avoid
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subjects because these subjects indirectly help in succeeding academically by having a healthy mind
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of a healthy body.
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