The advances in air travel are focused only in first class and this seems to have left others with no benefits at all. Do you agree or disagree?
It appears that first class is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
The noun phrase special screen seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that there is a missing preposition after the word caused. Consider adding the preposition.
It appears that the word but is unnecessary in this sentence. Consider removing it.
The indefinite article an may not be required with the plural noun advantages in this sentence. Consider removing the article, or changing the noun to singular.
It appears that there is a missing preposition after the word regardless. Consider adding the preposition.
It appears that there is a missing preposition after the word well. Consider adding the preposition.
It appears that there is a missing preposition after the word except. Consider adding a preposition.
It appears that the article usage in the phrase the space is incorrect. Consider making a change.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.