The advances in air travel are focused only in first class and this seems to have left others with no benefits at all. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that

first

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first-class

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class

passengers are grabbing more attention with advantages, economic

class

travellers fewer benefits

instead

. In my opinion, as the technologies have improved a lot and bringing up more benefits as the social

class

as well.

Firstly

, the Business

class

really offers much dominance to passengers i.e. pull out their bed, private area to work with power outlet, lounges, private shower areas

also

they have a private screen to entertain themselves. At

this

innovative world, technologies have brought so many benefits for the economic

class

travellers as well i.e. they have

also

s

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pecial screen to enjoy the movie or some other show, offering quality food with great services.

Although

the cramped area may be caused

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passengers for discomfort in long haul flights,

but

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other facilities are being developed with the budget.

Nevertheless

, the fatal air crashes have fallen dramatically in over a couple of years. Apart, a lot of airlines have been giving so many other facilities and offers to passengers in order to board the flights.

However

, the official

class

has extra perks to enjoy but social

class

although

being

an

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advantages of luxuries. Another benefit can be all appreciated by all is the speed at which modern jet planes are now able to reach their destinations making distant travel more frequent and faster. In conclusion, regardless

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the price of their ticket, the economic

class

passengers as well

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as

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having luxurious facilities except

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the

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space.