The advances in air travel are focused only in first class and this seems to have left others with no benefits at all. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that
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passengers are grabbing more attention with advantages, economic
travellers fewer benefits
. In my opinion, as the technologies have improved a lot and bringing up more benefits as the social
as well.
, the Business
really offers much dominance to passengers i.e. pull out their bed, private area to work with power outlet, lounges, private shower areas
they have a private screen to entertain themselves. At
innovative world, technologies have brought so many benefits for the economic
travellers as well i.e. they have
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pecial screen to enjoy the movie or some other show, offering quality food with great services.
the cramped area may be caused
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passengers for discomfort in long haul flights,
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other facilities are being developed with the budget.
, the fatal air crashes have fallen dramatically in over a couple of years. Apart, a lot of airlines have been giving so many other facilities and offers to passengers in order to board the flights.
, the official
has extra perks to enjoy but social
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advantages of luxuries. Another benefit can be all appreciated by all is the speed at which modern jet planes are now able to reach their destinations making distant travel more frequent and faster. In conclusion, regardless
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the price of their ticket, the economic
passengers as well
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having luxurious facilities except
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