You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information center. In your letter •Tell them how long you are staying •Ask for some suggestions for what to do •Find out if any local events happening at that time

#town #month #tourist #information #center #•tell #•ask #suggestions #•find #events #time

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am coming to your town next week on Sunday, 14th November. I will be staying there for 7 days and 6 nights. My booking of a hotel is already confirmed. I am new to the place so I do not have idea of any good place to visit. I want some suggestions from you on

must-visi

Correct your spelling

must-visit

places. I have heard about the big zoo so I want to know if I should buy a ticket for the zoo.

Moreover

, I am a foody person and love to explore authentic dishes so I would be glad if you would introduce me to some good restaurants in your town.

Lastly

, I would be happy to join any local events or festivals happening at that time as I love to explore new cultures and meet new people. I would highly appreciate your help. Thank you for your consideration. Faithfully,

Swheta

Correct your spelling

Shweta

Submitted by bhat.shweta17 on Tue Nov 12 2024

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Coherence & Cohesion

Make sure to clearly separate different points/ideas into distinct paragraphs to improve readability.

Task Achievement

The tone could be slightly more formal considering it's a letter to a tourist information center.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter opens and closes appropriately with 'Dear Sir or Madam' and 'Faithfully, Swheta.'

Task Achievement

You provided a clear request for suggestions and information about local events.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

161 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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