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Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Truly agree with the statement, being highly skilled is the only way to ensure a stable as well as
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ell-paying job, whereas others say
work
experience
 can lead to acquiring a high-paying job. Currently
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it is a going on
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ebate, with both statements having their pros and cons.
Therefore
, I believe qualification is an essential ingredient and it does hold more importance than
work
experience
 only.
To begin
 with, being competent and possessing certain skills is prerequisite to acquiring a good job in the MNC in the current time.
For example
, graduates from IIT, Harvard, MIT and Cambridge get hired by a type of companies which hold the capacity to recruit them as well as nurture.
Subsequently
, these graduates' starting point is from renowned companies like Microsoft or Google, which have the ability to provide them with perks and sufficient monetary support for their effort.
Such
 graduates are often labelled as ‘Gold Standard’ and used as benchmarks for the companies due to their abilities and skills.
On the contrary
,
work
experience
 is a crucial segment of professional life, as
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professionals can hone their skills while tackling live projects and developing on-ground expertise.
For instance
, it is observed that people who
work
 in a particular industry over 10 years are highly-respected as well as are compensated as per their expertise.
Moreover
, it is essential to determine your starting point as well because it would mark your career growth and trajectory but
such
 decisions are not in the control of the job-seeker. Eventually, it depends on the luck to be hired by an established company versus
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 company as a beginning point.
However
, to conclude with, in my opinion
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competency can outweigh the
work
experience
 as with skill you can obtain a decent pay immediately
instead
, similar can’t be defined for the
work
experience
.
Although
, in some cases can have a special opportunity but it is not accurately always possible.
Submitted by Purvi Agarwal on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Highly qualified
  • Well-paying job
  • Securing
  • Knowledge
  • Expertise
  • Higher positions
  • Higher salaries
  • Practical skills
  • Real-world setting
  • Employers value
  • Professional connections
  • Ideal
  • Industry
  • Job role
  • Opinion
  • Experience
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