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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.**To what extent do you agree with this statement?*

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Nowadays,people consume medicines prescribed by doctors and changing their medicines if not effective.
This
 is due to the same medicines with different brand enters into the medical market. Some of the medicines are very good while change and others become shows some side effects.
This
 essay will deal with reasons and examples of
this
.I believe that the doctors would be the best person to know these medicines before prescribing it.
To begin
 with,people facing stressful life due to their busy schedule and extending long working hours. Due to
this
, they fell into illness and go to the hospital and consume medicines prescribed by
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octor.
Although
 the medicines are good,
this
 would not be suitable for the patient.
Hence
 the patient goes to the same
doctor
 and inform the situation. The
doctor
 would prescribe alternate medicine,
however
,
this
 time the results show some side effects.
On the other hand
, Some of the patients would see enormous benefits after changed medicine by the
doctor
. A section of people asked why the results show differently. Research shows that there is a number of same medicines with different brands enters into the medical market which has few chemical compositions been changed in their brands.
Hence
 the result behaves differently to each patient.
For instance
, In India,
this
 is very common that the same medicines with different brands. The medical representative promotes its products into the
doctor
 to ask their patients to use them.
As a result
,
this
 is very good for some patients and others face side effects or even too dangerous in their health. In Conclusion, the medicines prescribed by the
doctor
 should be very well known about the product and their consequences.
This
 would suffice to the patients should not get effect due to the alternate medicines.
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