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Writing Samples
Band 8.5

Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to offer time for local environmental initiatives in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: * Describe a local volunteer project that you are passionate about * Explain what you would like to do to help * Suggest how to gather more support for the cause

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Dear Sir,
This
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 letter is being written with regard to an advertisement published in The Guardian Newspaper Sunday edition of our area for seeking time and assistance in your upcoming EnvoHelp
Project
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, a
project
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 to secure the environment. At the onset, I would like to express my willingness to be part of
this
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 volunteering
project
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 as it is typically focused on the reduction of deforestation and soil erosion in our area. Since 10000 trees in our area were cut down in
last
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 decade,
such
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project
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 was quite important to be initiated. Being a farming equipment manufacturer, I assist you with 100 tools for the plantation of trees
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 1000 saplings.
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, to gather support, it would be easy for us if we could have a conversation with our local administration and educational institution. As the environmental week will start next Monday, both authorities and academic centres can easily permit and give volunteers for
this
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project
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. I hope you will consider my ideas and allow me to participate in your
project
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. Yours faithfully, Jacob Brown

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Consider elaborating a bit more on your personal connection to the project and any past experiences with similar volunteer work.
coherence cohesion
Although the logical structure is strong, ensure each paragraph addresses one single idea or aspect more clearly to aid in readability.
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The letter successfully addresses all parts of the prompt, including describing the project, offering specific help, and suggesting ways to generate more support.
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The tone of the letter is formal and appropriate for the audience.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear and logical structure. It opens with a formal greeting and closes with a polite sign-off.
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