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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words

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The public transportation system of the 20th century is more rigid and safe as compared to past decades and still many countries trying to improve
this
 more. In
this
 essay,we will discuss the various benefits of using public
transport
 in our environments and how
this
 will help us in reducing pollution. Nowadays, every city does not matter it's big or small have its own public transportation system which is way much improved. Going
further
, its time for us to use
this
 system at a greater extent.
This
 thing is beneficial for us in many ways.
Firstly
, when we drive less car or other
transport
 and rely on public
transport
 more for our general task,
then
 we will consume less fuel which means less carbon emission in the atmosphere.
Secondly
, if fewer people commuting in their personal vehicle and using other means of publicly owned
transport
 that’s directly related to fewer conjunctions on roads which means less traffic jam, that saves a lot of money on fuel, which
otherwise
 consumes by their car when running ideal in traffic, that
also
 save the climate by letting fewer gases in the air. At
last
 greatest asset of human being precious time which they going to save when they are not wasting time in traffic jams.
However
, in some places inside the city it is not possible to reach with public means for that we definitely need other means of
transport
. At
last
,I would like to say that we already make our world the worst place to live compared to
l
Add an article
the
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ast century in term of environment. We should at least try to adapt to changes like using public
transport
 more often and make a positive change toward a less polluted world.
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