You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words

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The public transportation system of the 20th century is more rigid and safe as compared to past decades and still many countries trying to improve

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essay,we will discuss the various benefits of using public

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in our environments and how

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will help us in reducing pollution. Nowadays, every city does not matter it's big or small have its own public transportation system which is way much improved. Going

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, its time for us to use

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system at a greater extent.

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thing is beneficial for us in many ways.

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, when we drive less car or other

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and rely on public

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more for our general task,

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we will consume less fuel which means less carbon emission in the atmosphere.

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, if fewer people commuting in their personal vehicle and using other means of publicly owned

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that’s directly related to fewer conjunctions on roads which means less traffic jam, that saves a lot of money on fuel, which

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consumes by their car when running ideal in traffic, that

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save the climate by letting fewer gases in the air. At

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greatest asset of human being precious time which they going to save when they are not wasting time in traffic jams.

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, in some places inside the city it is not possible to reach with public means for that we definitely need other means of

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,I would like to say that we already make our world the worst place to live compared to

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ast century in term of environment. We should at least try to adapt to changes like using public

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more often and make a positive change toward a less polluted world.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

287 words

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