Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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to the health of children, because buy sugary foods will decrease that solves the modern issue.
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scientists tested the productivity of people after 30 days of non-sugar days ,as the resulting creativity rose to 30 per cent and people felthtem light and they can work more hours with productivity. It shows that tariff can
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • processed foods
  • punitive measures
  • revenue
  • public health campaigns
  • awareness
  • government overreach
  • personal freedoms
  • unhealthy diets
  • economic burden
  • sugar-related health issues
  • consumer behavior
  • taxation
  • high levels of sugar
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