Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Most countries created taxes for meals with a lot

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sugar. Some people think that created taxes for meals is

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xcellent idea ,but

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disagree with

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.I think that will be beneficial to people .

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of view. On the one hand,

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to the health of children, because buy sugary foods will decrease that solves the modern issue.

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adults will buy more healthy products ,that will affect their life.

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scientists tested the productivity of people after 30 days of non-sugar days ,as the resulting creativity rose to 30 per cent and people felthtem light and they can work more hours with productivity. It shows that tariff can

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the illegal purchase will rise . If the price created most wealthy people can pay ,

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foods with high sugar limited the money for

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will increase ,because people like to buy limited things.

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, band to the opium created rose of illegal buying and adults begin

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buy opium the twenty per cent more. To conclude, the tax for sugary food can be beneficial,while it

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affects illegal buying of

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product. In my opinion with

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tax government must popularize the healthy diet and increase the number of society with a healthy lifestyle.