The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that governments should
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allocate
more money in
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study rather than other subjects which can help the
development
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of a
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. I disagree with
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notion. In
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essay, I will consider both sides
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of
the argument. There is no doubt
science
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is around our life,
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as technology. We use
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omputer or mobile phone in our
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daily
life that makes us more convenient to communicate with each other.
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, many corporations through
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nternet to connect their
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consumers
or business partners which help them to achieve the goal.
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, we
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use
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kind of technology to connect with our friends.
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, we use apps to send
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messages
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and others can receive them immediately.
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makes the process of the connection faster and smoothly.
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,
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development
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of a
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is not only relating to
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. Accept
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, we
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need
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professional to create our
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, like athlete, artist and so on.
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, the best way should be all-round
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. The evidence is if there are just scientists,
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other jobs would be
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to do it.
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, all-round
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is
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a
benefits
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for our
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. In every different
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field
, we
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need various
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specialist
.
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can help our
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become stronger. In conclusion,
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cience subject is necessary
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because it
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people to communicate easily and the connection
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faster.
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, I strongly that all-round
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is more important.
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because
we need
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ifferent specialist to develop our
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and it makes our
country
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become stronger.
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