Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others,however,believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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esponsible person of the community. A group o people hold the view that it is a

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of parents but some believe that only schools should have

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responsibility. In my opinion, I agreed that parents and schools should be accountable for

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responsibility

because a

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learn to obey the elder and schools are the places where he or she become

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ocial person.

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view that parents should teach them to become a good member of

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ommunity because

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the

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place where a

child

spend their

first

two years. Even though they can learn talk from their parents so

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gardens

gardeners

have an initial chance to teach them.

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, a study shows that most of the children use the same

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pattern

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language

, which they learn from their home or parents.

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it is a milestone in a

child

's life.

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, some people think that schools should have all responsibility in a

child

's enhancement because it is a place where a

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everything

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education, manners, behaviour.

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, an individual

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to be socialized in schools

first

he or she

start

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meeting with new people.

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life in future. In conclusion, in my point of view

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I think that children's bringing up is a most significant role for parents as well as a school

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because

both are

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instructors because they learn to communicate and socialize from both places.