You want to apply to a private college seeking admission for a bachelor degree. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment and can not get admitted to the college without some help. Write a letter to the Principal of the college explaining your situation and ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial help available.

Dear Sir, I am Harvey Spectar, and I am writing
this
letter to show my
interested
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to enrol in a bachelor of
an
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engineering degree program at your college.
However
, I am in dilemma to apply or not as I am facing financial difficulties currently.
To begin
with, I have outstanding high school grades
98
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% which is above
than
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the criteria mentioned in the offered course.
Moreover
, I have worked day and night to prepare for the application at your
university
including essay and recommendation letter submission.
Although
I am a perfect match, I am hesitant to make
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move
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. My aunt was sick. So, I had to use my savings for her medicine and hospitalization bill settlement. I would like to know
that is
there any option for me to get financial help from the
university
. As your
university
is well known, I am sure there must be a scholarship program for needy students; I would like to enquire about it and know my eligibility.
Furthermore
, I would like to assure you that if I get aid from
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, I will never disappoint with my grade by working hard to be
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the topper list. Yours sincerely, Harvey
Spectar
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Spectre
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