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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having only one language in the world?

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Language is an integral part of human existence. Some people think that due to tourism, English is becoming the most spoken and used language around the world
as a result
, other linguals are at stake. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both upsides and downsides of the world being monolingual.
To begin
 with, one of the biggest pros is that society would be able to communicate in a better manner. Henceforth, people will develop a clearer understanding of each other.
For instance
, it has been observed that citizens of a nation have a native mother tongue understand one another in a better way.
On the other hand
, if the world starts using only English as their medium for speech, other mother tongues will be extinct because of which the literature crafted in various other linguals will vanish.
Furthermore
, due to
this
 history attached is compromised.
For example
, in India itself, more than 20 languages have disappeared
as a result
, the pupil will never get to learn about their roots.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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