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Some people claim that many things that children are taught at school are a waste of time. Other people argue that everything that children study at school is useful at sometime. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

#people #children #school #waste #time #study
In
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 globalisation era, educational institute
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 vital role in every student life. Some echelons of the society
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 that
eductional
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educational
 institute
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 the
time
 of the children because they teach extra things to the students while others think that
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 very fruitful for pupils to learn everything in
school
 . I firmly agree with the former statement and
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 will discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, teachers waste a lot
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time
 to teach extra things to the pupils because
some
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time
 children have no interest in extra curriculum activities.
For instance
, some
school
 compulsory the music subject in
school
 but some students are not interested in singing. So, it creates
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urden on the student .
Moreover
, the syllabus
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 very tough due to more competition
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these days and students have no
time
 to do extra things because they concentrate only
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the main subjects .
Furthermore
, some
school
 provides extra things for only money and some
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 not beneficial for
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student
students
 . Its only motive to gain money not provide education.
On the other hand
, sometimes other activities have many
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 for students .
First
 is that
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they gain
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more knowledge about the other curriculum activities and it will help in future.
For instance
, they learn
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ance in
school
 and may it help to win
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any dance competition .
Additionally
, they
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 new skills
such
 as cooperative and competitive. And
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 very helpful when they will doing
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ob . They
also
 learn communication skills in schools . So ,
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 very good source for students to learn extra things in
school
 and sometimes they helpful in future. In conclusion, I
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reiterate
 that institution waste the
time
 of student by
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 extra things because
school
 motives only to gain money and it creates
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urden on the students.
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