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With An Increasing Population Communicating Via The Internet, Face To Face Communication Will Become A Thing Of The Past.

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Introduction
Nowadays, with the development of advanced
communication
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 technology, interacting with other people on the
internet
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 become more and more popular. Several people argued that traditional
communication
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 will be behind the times and be replaced by theses modern
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 methods. I partly agree with
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 with, there are some positive influences of increasing population communicating via the
internet
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.
First
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 and foremost,
this
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 way is as easy as pie for people to make new friends all over the world. In detailed, people need only a smartphone or a computer which connects
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nternet in order to talk with friends everywhere and every time.
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, a huge number of people use Facebook, which is the most popular social networking sites so as to share their emotions or make small talks with other people.
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, communicating via the
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 helps residents save time and money.
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, previously, to talk with relationships or friends who live oversea, people must make international calls which cost them a great deal. But now, thanks to
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nternet, people can communicate through some applications
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 as Facebook, Skype or Viber.
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communication
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 methods have some drawbacks. One of the disadvantages which I want to say is that texting and social media cause the downfall of society's interpersonal
communication
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. In fact, a lot of people only are at their homes and do not go out to interacting with one another.
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 seems to be a virtual life and the strong relationships will not be built.
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, the information on the
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 may be not accurate and the fact shows that some people will be tricked by uncensored news.
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On the other hands,
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 to
face
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communication
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also
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 is beneficial to the humankind.
Firstly
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, gestures body language plays an integral part in conveying messages. It is clearly seen that a conventional
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interaction and strengthen relationships.
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, it is safer for people to expose the right information source and it is easier to keep privacy than communicating via the
internet
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.
Conclusion
In conclusion,
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 there are some positive impacts of online
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 on people, I strongly believe that it is impossible to eliminate
face
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 to
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communication
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 entirely because of some disadvantages listed above.

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