With An Increasing Population Communicating Via The Internet, Face To Face Communication Will Become A Thing Of The Past.

Nowadays, with the development of advanced
communication
technology, interacting with other people on the
internet
become more and more popular. Several people argued that traditional
communication
will be behind the times and be replaced by theses modern
communication
methods. I partly agree with
this
view.
To begin
with, there are some positive influences of increasing population communicating via the
internet
.
First
and foremost,
this
way is as easy as pie for people to make new friends all over the world. In detailed, people need only a smartphone or a computer which connects
i
Add an article
the
show examples
nternet in order to talk with friends everywhere and every time.
For example
, a huge number of people use Facebook, which is the most popular social networking sites so as to share their emotions or make small talks with other people.
Moreover
, communicating via the
internet
helps residents save time and money.
For instance
, previously, to talk with relationships or friends who live oversea, people must make international calls which cost them a great deal. But now, thanks to
i
Add an article
the
show examples
nternet, people can communicate through some applications
such
as Facebook, Skype or Viber.
Besides
advantages,
this
Change the determiner
these
show examples
communication
methods have some drawbacks. One of the disadvantages which I want to say is that texting and social media cause the downfall of society's interpersonal
communication
. In fact, a lot of people only are at their homes and do not go out to interacting with one another.
This
seems to be a virtual life and the strong relationships will not be built.
Secondly
, the information on the
internet
may be not accurate and the fact shows that some people will be tricked by uncensored news. On the other hands,
face
to
face
communication
also
is beneficial to the humankind.
Firstly
, gestures body language plays an integral part in conveying messages. It is clearly seen that a conventional
communication
method will raise
the
Remove the article
apply
show examples
interaction and strengthen relationships.
In addition
, it is safer for people to expose the right information source and it is easier to keep privacy than communicating via the
internet
. In conclusion,
although
there are some positive impacts of online
communication
on people, I strongly believe that it is impossible to eliminate
face
to
face
communication
entirely because of some disadvantages listed above.
Submitted by jayz.3382 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: