Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

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Nowadays, university education is getting popular and companies request a degree when they open job opportunities. In the professional area, gender equality is really important because companies need to provide

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professional positions for both genders in equally.

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, I do not agree universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject for some reasons. There may be many arguments about that but in my opinion, interesting areas of the females and the males quite different. Male and female students can sometimes be more prone to specific things.

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, most the male students tend to join engineer programs because of their interesting area.

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like playing computer, investigate electrical system etc. Female students

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can be inclined to engineering

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numbers of male students who want to join the program will be

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from males students.

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, female students being more

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than male students in the social sciences area. There

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, universities should not use force to the student to choose not

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nteresting program. Since students

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program which they are ineffective, students may be unsuccessful in their professional life. The other thing is, sometimes companies have to open job opportunities for males because of the legal regulation. According to Turkish Labor Law, females have not

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, if universities give some geologist or some programs about the hydrosphere etc. because, in Turkey, there is a hydrosphere engineering. In

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when they graduate. To sum up, there are some problems with accepting equal numbers of male and female students in universities in every subject. ıt should not be.

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender diversity
fostering innovation
educational experience
enforcing gender quotas
merit and potential
individual achievements
natural differences
gender equality
reducing gender stereotypes
balanced workforce
traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
fluctuating applicant numbers
compromise on quality
diversity aspects

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