Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operation rather than compete became useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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contemporary era, the world is

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changing

rapidly and dramatically. Nowadays, children have more immense pressures from their parents to

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the child

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door. So, some people think that sense of co-operation must be inclined in them, whereas others argue that

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ense of

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is more beneficial. I totally agree with the latter view.

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and foremost,

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is a part of daily life and without it

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we cannot survive in

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world.

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, infants must develop important skills through the

competition

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. It builds confidence in them, which can be useful for their later life.

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, if they compete with themselves and others,

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they would be better than they in the past, because of it they can able to achieve what they want. They have a clear and keen vision

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the goal.

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to the above, another advantage is they always aim high and to achieve that they set benchmarks. In those times, they never make excuses to work hard.

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, their focus is clear. Anytime they do their work, they fully dedicated to a task. It helps individuals to excel well in

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society

. They would know their abilities very well.

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,

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uman is a social animal. They cannot be remained isolated for a long time. Socialism is

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important

to

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develop

good relationships with others. It, not only

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develops

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selflessness, in which the person thinks about society and others before himself but

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developes

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develops

brotherhood as well. Owing to

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, the person develops emotional connections with people and they turn into a gentleman. To conclude,

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makes

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an perfect. The infants would turn into

an obedient and good citizens

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obedient and good citizens

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of any nation. The pros outweigh the cons.