In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? And give your own opinion.

Globalization has turned the world into a global village. Certainly,
this
has influenced the way people used to get their university degrees. While it was very common for students to gain a degree from their own country, today the trend has changed and pupils tend to get a higher qualification from abroad. In
this
essay, I am trying to elaborate merits and demerits of
such
a trend along with my logical viewpoint. There are myriad of benefits for obtaining a degree from other countries. To embark with, it is one of the best ways to migrate to other
nation
. To explain, most of all western countries virtue certificates more which are provided by their
nation
's universities.
Such
that it works as add on while applying for migration there.
For instance
, Canada express migration system allocates more points to those who hold Canadian education.
Besides
, studying abroad opens more door to know about different cultures, explore more about the world and make friends with locals. On the other side of the spectrum, when the aforementioned trend wasn't famous, people used to study in their home country, that was the best way to prevent skilled worker outsourcing. From
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ation's perspective knowledge migration is a serious issue as developing countries invest resources for one's primary education; later on, they move to developed countries that results in lack of talent in developing countries.
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tudents' perspective, they face social pressure to move as soon as they complete their high school, that might afflict their mental state causing stress and anxiety.
Also
, not everyone can afford to move abroad
such
that who are left behind feel less of themselves. In conclusion,
although
there are numerous benefits of acquiring higher certifications from developed nations, the drawbacks on developing
nation
and student's mindset are unavoidable. Yet, I believe knowledge is important whether it is gained from homeland or abroad, but one must serve to their own country which aided for primary education.
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