Artists like writers , actors and singers grab more attention than scientists and inventors. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

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It has been said by many that celebrities, singers and writers seem to be seen as more attractive than scientists and business people. I completely agree with
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with, the person working in science and business are not seen as captivating despite, the necessary inventions and services they provide to the nation.
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, their contribution has not been appreciated according to deeds or hard work, they pay for the country.
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, Research by the University of Delhi states, the scientist named Sanjiv Mehta created the environment-friendly vehicle which runs by exposure to the sun, was not praised which is expected.
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, reducing the amount of motivation among them.
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, eminent personalities like singers, actors, and writers earn colossal respect and attention from the public by providing them entertainment and virtual excitement.
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, today, entertainment through streaming movies and listening to songs act as a basic needs for today's world. Which is indeed essential to get relief from hectic schedules.
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, celebrities like Akshay Kumar and singer Neha Kakkar have tremendous million followers in their Twitter or Instagram sites.
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, Engineer and investors should require to be appraised in order to be motivated while rendering services. To conclude, in present, entertainment industry act as a dominant industry which is fancy by many and gained popularity more than workers who work as scientists or investors.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • grab attention
  • creative expression
  • cultural impact
  • emotional connection
  • innovation
  • scientific progress
  • inventions
  • technological advancements
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