In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is stated that the majority of people travelling in their own country will exceed than those who are travelling abroad in the coming years. I completely disagree with

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belief as with the advancement in the tourism industry, new horizons have come into the picture through which one can explore the globe in a more convenient and better way. In the following essay, I will substantiate my views on the same with relevant examples. Certainly, our world is full of mesmerizing places with so much of hidden treasures to explore, and that’s why the travel industry tries to make a traveller’s experience the ultimate one. So, for the same purpose, they promote best and cheap travel options with exciting offers.

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, Airline companies like Emirates or Vistara provide the flight tickets inclusive of meals at very reasonable rates.

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thing which a travel freak will search is the best stay, for which again there are multiple options available online.

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, Homestays like Airbnb or Oyo rooms are in the prime demand as it offers a complete home-like experience in the foreign land.

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, in the current scenario of the covid pandemic, many people believe that world tourism will be badly affected as a majority will give preference to local sites rather than distant ones in regards to safety as well as security. But, in my opinion, just like in history,

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is just a phase which will soon pass away and

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things will get right on the track.

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, many years back, Bird flu has affected many parts in the globe which lasted for a few months and

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soon life came to a normal pace. In conclusion, though some argue that in the future, a majority will prefer spending vacation in their own country rather than going abroad,

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not possible as countries like Dubai where touristry is the major source of income will find out more attractive options for the visitors which they will not be able to deny.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

344 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

domestic tourism
international travel
cultural exchange
national pride
affordability
convenience
ecotourism
heritage sites
local businesses
comfort zone

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