you have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a yar. writte a letter to the couple. in your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

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letter to inform you that I saw the advertisement you posted in the job street application. I am interested in the position of teaching your two children to learn Spanish for a year since I'm currently in need of a job. I just moved here to continue my studies

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job will support me. I am very pleased that I can teach your children in Spanish since that's my first language and I was born in Spain. I just moved here to Australia to study and it will really help me with my financial needs if you hire me. Aside from Spanish, I can

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teach them how to speak Korean since I am a multi-linguistics student. So I think I am suitable for that position.

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, I can only work for 5 hrs in a day, thrice a week if it's okay with you since I am studying. Hope to get me back as soon as you receive my letter to you. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Abigail

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logical structure

Ensure the letter has a logical structure. Begin with an appropriate greeting, introduce your main reason for writing in the first paragraph, develop each point in a separate paragraph, and conclude with a formal closing.

single idea per paragraph

Use paragraphing appropriately. Each paragraph should contain a single idea or topic. Ensure you start a new paragraph for each new idea or topic introduced in your letter.

complete response

Fully address all parts of the task. Make sure you explain why you think you would be suitable for the job, mention what else you could do for the family, and give your reasons for wanting the job. Make these points clearly and expand on each one.

suitable writing tone

Use a tone appropriate for a job application. Address the couple in a more formal manner and maintain a formal and respectful tone throughout the letter. Avoid an overly casual or informal tone.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

175 words

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