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Some children have a natural ability to grasp foreign languages and for that reason it should not be a mandatory subject in the academic curriculum. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Learning is the best means of communication. Children have very well capable of learning a foreign
language
. Due to
this
, A section of the society informs not to include a foreign
language
 in their
syllabus
. I strongly disagree that it should impact on their future.
This
 essay will provide reasons and support to add foreign
language
 as required one.
To begin
 with, A section of the society requesting the government not to make the foreign
language
 as mandate one.
This
 would impact their mother
language
 while speaking or writing. They cannot be shine if the foreign
language
 includes in their
syllabus
.
For instance
, In India, the German
language
 made it as mandatory in their
syllabus
 in some of the primary schools. Due to
this
, children find it difficult to follow the grammar of the German
language
 as it is very tough to learn them.
On the other hand
, children have very good in understanding the foreign
language
 until 5 years old. Scientists said that children can learn more languages at early ages,unlike adults.
Although
 some of the languages are confusion, children do not find it difficult in it.
Moreover
, they can help their parents in terms of accent and grammatical mistakes which parents usually do.
Hence
, we should not make the
language
 as optional in their academic year. We
also
 support children who find difficult to learn the foreign
language
 by means of encouraging Quiz competition and some other techniques to make them easy. In Conclusion, we should support to add foreign
language
 in their
syllabus
. I believe
this
 would help children can learn it and it would be highly beneficial in their future in terms of education, employment and so on.
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