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People today spend less and less time interacting with other people in their neighborhood and this has a negative impact on communities. What are the possible causes of this problem? How can it be resolved?

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Today’s problematic situations are gradually influencing
neighbors
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 to lose social attitudes. There might be several reasons,
such
 as a burden of work and implicit conflicts.
This
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this
 and propose some solutions. One of the main causes of the problem is
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xcessive time of working. 80% of employers, who are buried under
paperworks
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paperwork
 prefer to have sufficient time to relax at home.
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, it might cause
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o keep an amiable company. To tackle
this
 problem, people should have temporary invitations with the people who live
next
 door or at least on the weekends. Another problem is that many people behave disrespectfully to their
neighborhood
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, which leads to social distance. There are a number of reasons why there may be conflicts. In some cases
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disputes start when people have to share space with their
neighbors
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.
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, disagreement can occur over amends to boundaries.
Consequently
, their
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 are suspended to prevent
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ollowing disagreement. A solution for the legislation to figure out inevitable problems in land law immediately. To sum up, maintaining a less time interaction caused by business and emotional disputes are solved by a compromise approach to conflict resolution.
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