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Some people believe that advertising has a strong effect on a person’s decision-making process. Others feel that it has little or no real impact. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many companies are spending a colossal amount
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 advertising. There are some
people
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 who believe that it influences
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 purchasing, though others feel that it has no
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 effects. In my view,
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, I think that it affects the choice of individuals significantly.
To begin
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 with, the advertisements create an interest among
people
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 to purchase that product or service. It is mainly
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 the innovative ways of making commercials, which makes individuals relate with them, thereby they end up purchasing it. The famous advert about a health supplement, Complain,
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, depicted that children grow taller if they consume it on a regular basis, so many concerned parents bought that drink to increase the height of their offspring.
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, had there not been any commercials which developed
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 towards that item or service, there would not have been much demand for them.
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, many feel that advertisements have no impact on the choice of individuals
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 buying. It is
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 the fact that
people
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 have become more concerned about their spending
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, which refrains them from getting carried away by any marketing tactics. In India, the sales of four-wheelers,
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, drastically reduced when the nation
had
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suffered a massive recession, as it created a thought among
people
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 to limit their expenses.
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, it is apparent that unless and until there is a requirement,
people
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 restrict their purchases.
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, huge money
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 being
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spent
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 on commercials by organisations.
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 there is an opinion among
people
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 that it alters
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mind-set
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mindset
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of
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them
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when buying commodities or availing
services
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of services
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, others contend that it hardly has an impact. Despite varied views,
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 me, undoubtedly advertisements have
its
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 impression on thoughts regarding the purchase.
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Ensure all parts of the essay prompt are addressed in a balanced manner. Provide a clear opinion and support it with strong arguments.
coherence and cohesion
Organize ideas in a clear, logical manner. Use appropriate linking words and cohesive devices to connect ideas and paragraphs effectively.
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