Some people say that now we can s films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen i a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A contemporary world with developed technology makes our life very mobile. Because of
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people prefer watching movies on their electronic devices, smartphones and tablets, and do not like to go to a
movie
theater
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. But there are some individuals who still believe that films should be seen in a
movie
house. I think that
although
watching films in phones has some benefits, but satisfaction and joy from a picture can be only on a big screen in the theatre. On the one hand, nowadays people spend their free
time
on mobile devices more than before. It becomes a good entertainment and watching videos or films in different application, like Netflix or Youtube, is a new habit. One of the reason is
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ower cost in application than watching in a
movie
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.
For example
, you can have one account with premium subscription in Netflix, which allows you watch different movies in several devices,
therefore
, you can watch in your phone, meanwhile, your family can watch another picture on the TV set at home. One more benefits are mobility and portability , you can see
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ilm on your device in any place.
For instance
, while going to work by public transport you can start watching a
film
and procced when returning back in the evening . But unfortunately, phone small resolution can not transfer all colours and effects of a
film
.
On the other hand
, the full satisfaction from
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icture a person can have in a
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theatre. Morden films are created with amazing graphics and effects which are visible only on the
cinema
's big screen and with Dolby sound.
For example
, when I watched Avatar
movie
in a
cinema
with 3D glasses, I received more joy and emotions than from watching it at home in my tablet, because in the
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I had
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eeling of presence in the
movie
.
Moreover
, go to a
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it is a perfect past
time
with your friend.
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, I like to spend
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oment with my friends there and after
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ilm is ended to seat in the cafe and discuss its plot and the characters. In conclusion, watching films on mobile devices perhaps helps to save money and
time
, but visiting a
cinema
can bring more emotional satisfaction from graphics, sound and
film
's effects. In my opinion, we can use phones for
this
purpose just for killing
time
,
then
going to work or somewhere,
however
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eal
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real
really
fun
time
can be in a
cinema
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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