Some people believe that advertising has a strong effect on a person’s decision-making process. Others feel that it has little or no real impact. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Adverts
have become a major source for companies to publicise their commodities. That advertisements
have been playing a key role in deciding to buy a certain product for the people
is a subject which provokes great enthusiasm as well as
stark opposition, and at the
times both become somewhat blurred. There are strong arguments on both sides of the debate which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs Correct article usage
apply
along with
my opinion.
On the one
hand, those who consider adverts
to have a great impact on the individual's decision
to buy something say that it is because of the famous Bollywood stars signed by the marketing companies to achieve more success in their sales. Not only, do they appoint attractive models to influence the customers, but tell them to share their amazing experience of using their products which also
play
a key role in helping Correct subject-verb agreement
plays
people
to take
decisions. Correct your spelling
make
For example
, advertisement
related to a fairness cream advertised by a Correct article usage
an advertisement
fair skin toned
actress Add a hyphen
fair-skin-toned
influence
a number of dark complexion girls to buy that cosmetic cream. Change the verb form
influences
Besides
, adverts
also
help the
Correct article usage
apply
people
to make a better choice among the large number of options that one
have
to buy a single commodity, thanks to the diversity of brands we are provided with. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
As
Change preposition
For
an
instance, Correct article usage
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one
wishes
to buy a watch can go through a number of Correct pronoun usage
who wishes
adverts
published by different companies which can help him to buy a watch with the desired features of his choice.
Conversely
, however
, people
who think that such
advertisements
have no impact on Add an article
the decision
decision making
process point to an individual's awareness towards certain things they buy. Add a hyphen
decision-making
People
have become more aware of the quality of many products which might play a key role in failing to help people
to buy products through various adverts
. For instance
, people
before buying something believe to check
the quality by themselves Change preposition
in checking
than
relying on attractive Rephrase
rather than
advertisements
. In addition
, people
these days do not even bother to watch adverts
as they prefer to skip these whenever they get the chance to avoid such
advertisements
. To exemplify, while
watching Television, if one
gets a break to watch adverts
to
the middle of a show individuals prefer to change than channel rather than Change preposition
in
watching
the Wrong verb form
watch
adverts
.
To summarize, it appears to me that the opinion of no impact of adverts
on the decision
of people
to buy something favours stronger arguments. As it is one
's own decision
without getting attracted by advertisements
and looking into the quality by
himself before buying any product.Change preposition
apply
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the structure of the essay follows a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Use topic sentences to introduce main points and provide clear examples to support your ideas.
task achievement
Make sure to address all parts of the task, including presenting both views, providing clear examples, and concluding with your own opinion. Ensure that your ideas are comprehensive and directly relevant to the topic.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.
