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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Improving educational systems and institutions is one major responsibility of the government, which helps children to improve their knowledge in an efficient manner.
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, in my opinion, funding public schools better
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 is more important than
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 new fund allocation for private schools. According to many economists, the number of people who can afford
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ducation is evidently far less when compared to who cannot afford it. Especially in developing countries,
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, like India, public schools do not have the most basic facility, which can be improved substantially with proper government fund.
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, in the same country there are many luxurious private schools, which not only have basic but
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 have the most expensive features;
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, funding in the right direction in which people with minimum wages are helped in more appropriate.
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 structure in non-government bodies is irrational
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 and quite expensive. The quality of knowledge is
also
 outgrown due to better salary structure for faculty members, which expects them to reach the high standards. Basically, the amount generated from student's fees is used properly to improvise their standards of education and facilities required.
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, when the education is free, there is no means on
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conomy to be generated for investing in improvisation.
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, it is every ruling officials responsibility to fund properly for
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 sector, which helps
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ext generations to succeed. In conclusion, helping the one in need is more important than to help the rich, in every common ground. Developing the educational institutes in need
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society and helping the common man's needs is comparatively more accurate.
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