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More and more companies are allowing employees to work from home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#companies #employees #work #home #development
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 Covid-19 pandemic situation has changed the world in
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numerous way. One of them is how can we keep working when there is no chance to get to the workplace? The answer is companies can offer some sort of ways that employees can
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 from anywhere. In my point of view,
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 or anywhere is a beneficial development for workers and companies, too.
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 option for employees, it brings various benefits
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 for the employees. The primary and foremost advantage is
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family time. While working from
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, employees have
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hance to see their children in front of their eyes, which can help to maintain a strong relationship bond between parents and child. One more positive impact of
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mployee can feel relaxed at
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 compared to
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orkplace.
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 of
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 environment plays a vital role
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’s productivity.
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oftware developer stuck at some difficult error, he can go out for
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 can think of a solution.
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, by doing
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 one can balance his/her personal and professional life easily.
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, Company itself has
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umber of pros by taking remote
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 into the action. Workplaces are always been expensive from ages,
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ompany can cut out the cost of workplace building by being fully remote. On top of that, companies can reduce their pay scale as employees do not have extra expenses on their list
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, companies can profit more by cutting down the cost of building and salary. In conclusion, I must say if companies are able to provide remote
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 option to their employees
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 they should think of it. It brings fun and productivity with the
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ompany can make more money. Allowing
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 can create a better world.
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