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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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In the recent period,
waste
 production is increased heavily by humans. The major reasons for
such
 vast
waste
 accumulation due to an increase in demand and supply of every other product available in
this
 world. The gradual increase in population led us to
such
 a high demand for goods. In the UK, Europe, and Central Asia approximately 25 babies are born every minute. The numbers are pretty high when statistics are considered globally.
This
 gives a brief estimation of drastic population growth and its direct proportionate effect on
such
 produce. Statistics prove that the percentage of
waste
 created by manufacturing companies, hospitals, e-commerce departments and chemical factories is particularly high. It is
also
 called as e-
waste
 and medical-
waste
 and is very dangerous to the earth's crust, as they are non-biodegradable. In developed countries like the USA, due to the vast establishment of high
waste
 producing companies, the percentage of it produced is more.
Also
, the usage of non-reusable day-to-day products
such
 as plastic cutlery, electronic devices, and plastic bags is more.
Although
 these goods improve the standard of living, they are more dangerous and a very high quantity of garbage is accumulated. Improvising recycling methods throughout living is one good change that would highly help reduce garbage.
Likewise
, few Asian countries have invested high in the betterment of recycling and succeeded in achieving good results.
Moreover
, the government should establish a law, which invigilates it from every manufacturer and
also
 provide better financial support to enhance recycling strategies. In conclusion, an increase of
such
waste
 products is hazardous for future generations. Each and every individual should recycle it responsibly. Government support is highly important in improvising the recycling system and ought to restrict high
waste
 manufacturing companies.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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