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The internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world. Is all information reliable on the internet? What could be done to control information online?

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Over the
last
 few years
internet
 changes human life, it is argued that
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nternet has a good source of
information
 and people get the people to get benefit in terms of increasing their knowledge from
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nternet.
However
, not all
information
 is correct and trustworthy. Some people use it for spreading fake news or special propaganda.
Firstly
, people should not trust and
information
 which is available on
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nternet regardless the source of
information
 is authentic. They should have investigated
first
 about data like who share the data either it is passed by any official source or any individual pass the
information
 without any reference.
In addition
,
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nternet is a place where anybody can pass
information
 without any hustle
such
 a lot of companies use it for their marketing purpose, whereas it used for special task between two rivals,
For example
, In Asian countries, political parties use social media websites for promoting their political party and remind to people what have done in their previous government. They
also
 spread rumour for their opponent.
Secondly
, to avoid the wrong
information
 passes to the end-users, the government should parameters and validates the data to ensure the correct
information
 pass to the public.
For instance
, Facebook and YouTube give an option to their end-user to report the wrong data or
information
. By reporting incorrect things the authorities are removed those content from their websites. To summarize, the
internet
 is an ocean of
information
, there are good and bad data lies.
Therefore
 people should not trust and follow any
information
 blindly which is share on
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nternet; whereas the government should deploy authorize the body to control the fake and false activities
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