The international committee should act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. Do you agree or disagree?
The greater threat for humanity and for all life forms on the earth is global warming caused by human actions. I strongly agree that all countries should closely coordinate to drastically reduce the consumption of fossil fuels since the economic impacts of
pollution
in a country
impacts others and no nation will take initiative dueAdd the preposition
to
such
measures.
The pollution
of every country
impacts the environment of other countries in one way or another. Take for example
how mineral waste from factories in Chile affects Peruvian underground water reserves. Chilean waste from mining which results from the processing of cooper
is irresponsibly dumped in the desert. Correct your spelling
copper
This
pollution
not only contaminates the local wildlife but also
other countries. In a similar fashion, pollution
from Japanese fishing boats impacts the sea bed on the coast of many other countries. Since air and sea cannot be divided by physical borders, they act as a single global system and all countries must act together to reduce the environmental impact of industries.
Moreover
, this
is an era of competition in which all countries race each other to produce goods at a low cost. Since reducing reliance on crude oil will entail a huge investment in alternative sources of energy, it will increase the price of all manufactured goods and no country
will take this
initiative. The country
which takes initiative will lose a competitive advantage over others. In consequence, all countries should come together on a common platform such
as the United Nations and pledge to curtail the use of fossil fuels in an organized manner.
In conclusion, the future of humanity is at stake and the price of not acting is high. I believe countries must cooperate and impose strict reduction targets on pollution
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
