Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every student has their right to choose
their
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subjects they want in universities. Some people said that the universities should set a limit on the number of student in
gender
. Make a
class
has the same number of man and woman. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement, because it is not practical and not fair. In general, the sex ratio is hard to be equal in a country, not to mention in a university.
Gender
is controlled by genes, so it is impossible to
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that there will be the same amount of males and females in the same generation.
Therefore
, when it comes to the idea of accepting
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qual amount of students in
gender
in a university.
Moreover
, in some Asia countries, the sex ratio is deeply influenced by policy and culture.
For example
, in China, the government only allow one baby for one family and the traditional regards that man is better than
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oman.
As a result
, the population of
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ale is much more than female in the society of China. Because of that, male students must be more than female in universities. The sex ratio in each subject is naturally hard to be equal. Male and female have different talent and interest. Basically, people think that boys prefer cars and mechanical, while girls prefer make-up and commerce.
Therefore
, there must be different numbers of
gender
in
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class
. In universities, students can choose their subject depending on their interests. Take
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ake-up
class
for example
. If the
class
can accept 40 students in total, to follow the equal
gender
rules, there will be 20 space for male students and 20 for female. In fact, there are 35 female students want to join the
class
while only 5 male students want to attend. In
this
case, there will be 15 female students had to sacrifice their right to learn, and 15 male students had to attend the subject which they are not interested in.
As a result
, the policy is not really fair for students and will influence the right
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learning. Universities should consider the
gender
structure in
the
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society and respect the learning willing of each
gender
in every
subjects
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.
Although
the opinion of accepting the equal
gender
seems to be fair, there are still some other factors
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hould be considered
also
.
Therefore
, I think the universities should not just focus on
the
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gender
equality in numbers.
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  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
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  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
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  • balanced workforce
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