Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every student has their right to choose the subjects they want in universities. Some people said that the universities should set a limit on the number of student in
gender
. Make a
class
has the same number of man and woman. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement, because it is not practical and not fair. In general, the sex ratio is hard to be equal in a country, not to mention in a university.
Gender
is controlled by genes, so it is impossible to assume that there will be the same amount of males and females in the same generation.
Therefore
, when it comes to the idea of accepting
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amount of students in
gender
in a university.
Moreover
, in some Asia countries, the sex ratio is deeply influenced by policy and culture.
For example
, in China, the government only allow one baby for one family and the traditional regards that man is better than
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oman
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man
woman
.
As a result
, the population of
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ale is much more than female in the society of China. Because of that, male students must be more than female in universities. The sex ratio in each
subject
is naturally hard to be equal. Male and female have different talent and interest. Basically, people think that boys prefer cars and mechanical, while girls prefer make-up and commerce.
Therefore
, there must be different numbers of
gender
in
class
. In universities, students can choose their
subject
depending on their interests. Take
a
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ake-up
class
for example
. If the
class
can accept 40 students in total, to follow the equal
gender
rules, there will be 20 space for male students and 20 for female. In fact, there are 35 female students want to join the
class
while only 5 male students want to attend. In
this
case, there will be 15 female students had to sacrifice their right to learn, and 15 male students had to attend the
subject
which they are not interested in.
As a result
, the policy is not really fair for students and will influence the right to learning. Universities should consider the
gender
structure in society and respect the learning willing of each
gender
in every
subject
.
Although
the opinion of accepting the equal
gender
seems to be fair, there are still some other factors that
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should
could
be considered
also
.
Therefore
, I think
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universities should not just focus on
gender
equality in numbers.
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  • individual achievements
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