"Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

As a person ages, their responsibilities grow alongside. And as a child is growing up, there are a lot of things he or she needs to learn in order to become a better somebody in the future. In spite of

this

, there are so many pressures from diverse angles

such

as the school and the community as a whole

that is

being mounted on him to see to it that his dream is achieved at all cost. Catching up with the packed syllabi and matching up to state-of-the-art technology can be overwhelming.

However

,

this

frustration can be extenuated if the family and government support these young generations and

also

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up a bit. On the one

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chool program can be too much for the students to bare. Students normally find the things they must accomplish before they can graduate to be too much for them to finish at their own pace.

For instance

, a pupil is supposed to learn and pass ten different courses in order to move to the

next

class. Failure to do so means you will be stuck at where you are whiles your colleagues

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ahead.

This

normally demoralised the children.

On the other

hand

, young people have to move with the fast-moving technology. The cyber-world is diversifying and the ability to operate it adequately is a must for the younger youth.

This

is because the recent wold evolves around the internet and almost every child wants to be on the net.

However

, a helping

hand

from the state and family and reduction of the academic activities to the barest minimum can mitigate

this

burden. The government can build facilities that can help children relax,

such

as playing parks. The relatives

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on the other

hand

, can encourage them and advice them to always do the right things at the right time. The schools,

however

, can reduce their syllabus and integrate into it more exciting activities that can always make the students stay focus and stress-free.

For example

,

instead

of doing ten courses a term, it can be reduced to eight so that the pupils will have more time for themselves. To conclude,

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social and academic activities can exert pressure on the younger generation. Outnumbered school courses and social media can be the reason behind

this

.

However

, its effect can be reduced by the family members directing and supporting their wards.