Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people hold the view that our recent main environmental trouble is the

loss

of many

species

of plants and animals, while others think that there are more critical environmental problems. While I think plants and animals extinction is one of the main environmental problems, I still believe that there are many problems in our environment which are

also

important. I understand why some people hold the belief that

species

extinction is the most important environmental problem. The main point for

this

is that

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social media these days give people

many

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information about endangered

species

.

In addition

, many people know that losing any kind of plants or animals can break the food chain, which forms life on earth. By gathering information for many sources which only concern about plants and animals can lead people to the thought that

species

loss

is the biggest problem in the environment.

Nevertheless

, I would argue that there are many environmental problems that are more important than

species

loss

for several reasons. The

first

point is that the declination of natural resources.

This

can be seen in many Western countries that they often have wars because of oil needs. The

second

point is that many people all around the world today are deprived of freshwater.

This

is because the more developing the industry is, the more polluted the water is. In conclusion, while I agree that the

loss

of many

species

of plants and animals is an important problem, I am of the opinion that there are more important environmental problems that people need to concern.