Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?
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discuss some key elements that are required to create a perfect society and how as a community we can work together to achieve it.
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with, the ideal community should treat its pupil as equals. Everyone should be given the same privileges and income should be equally distributed. Selfishness is the biggest culprit of diminishing group harmony. Linking Words
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distinction of people based on their colour of skins is outrageous. To form an ideal society, we all have to become more tolerant and accepting of each other. No one should be targeted or humiliated based on their skin colour.
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thought should be instilled in people that God has created everyone as an equal and everyone should be respected and treated right regardless of their background.Linking Words
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