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Some people think that a person can never understand a culture of the country unless they speak the language. Do you agree with this opinion?

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Language
 is not only a basic tool of communication
,
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 but
also
 a part of
culture
 and heritage.
Language
 is recognised as a major quality that differs
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humans from other animals. Human evolution is completely driven by
the
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language
. Each and every
culture
 is deeply connected with their
language
 and it carries their heritage for centuries. Some people opine that to understand the
culture
 of a
country
, one must speak their
language
. I partially agree with their statement and I will explain why in
this
 essay with some examples. Thousands of languages around the world represent different cultures and different nations. Understanding any
country
's
culture
 is not that easy
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 unless you know the
language
 they speak. Native speakers of any
language
 use and understand it in a completely different way than others.
This
 act as a barrier to understanding the
culture
 of the
country
. Some times,
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ame word carries different and opposite meanings, native speakers can understand that by sounds or accents,
this
 plays a crucial role in some cultures. Even some non developed cultures, don't know about international languages, so it is hard for
anyone
 to communicate with them. Even some festivals in some cultures completely related to the
language
 they speak, these types of celebrations enhance their
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 with
p
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articular
language
. So to any
culture
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it is necessary to learn their
language
.
On the other hand
, if you go to any
country
 with a plethora of diversity like India, it is not easy to know deeply that
country
's
culture
 because of the different languages they speak. If
anyone
 wants to know about those type of countries, they should travel all over the
country
. Is it learning one
language
 can help
anyone
 to know the whole
country
's
culture
? In my knowledge learning a particular
language
 doesn't help them to know the
country
's
culture
. It is suitable for
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monolingual countries where everyone speaks or know one particular
language
. To conclude, learning
l
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anguage of a
country
 is really important to know it's
culture
, but it is not possible for all countries because of their diversity. I recommend
anyone
 to travel
in
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 the
country
 is the best option to know about all cultures in a
country
.
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