Some people think that a person can never understand a culture of the country unless they speak the language. Do you agree with this opinion?

in
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lethora of reasons, may it be for leisure, for business or even permanently for immigration purposes - to live and to retire in a foreign land. It is
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debateable
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debatable
that to get totally intermingled with a
country
's culture, it is paramount to learn the local
language
of that
country
and speak in the same
language
, without which it might be impossible. Well, I vehemently accord the same notion, and
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if he or she is ignorant of the local
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social beings and they have a
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urge and inquisition to understand other cultures and
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adapt
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to them. Undoubtedly, the culture of a
country
can only be well understood if you can understand the historical books, magazines and
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newspapers
that are published in that
country
. One should understand the local lingo and discuss it with the local crowd to understand their perspectives of whether they accord it or discord it. The national anthem of that
country
, the epic books are all written in their local
language
, and many other cultural festivals and ceremonies are always held in
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ocal
language
, and unless one understands and interact in
this
language
, they will be devoid of many intricacies and
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eal meaning of these, though they have an option of reading it in their translated native
language
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I still feel it will
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its charm and essence, it carries.
for example
. I never like a dubbed
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movie, but would always prefer to watch an
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movie, where dialogues are delivered and understood in
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riginal English
language
. Though some can argue that learning and speaking another
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time taking and tedious, Yet the benefits of learning
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oreign
language
are worth the effort. Researches have established the fact that people who are multilingual are far more flexible, have
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ot more
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adaptability
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inquisitive and intelligent. Natives of one
country
feel amused and
mix
up with foreigners easily, just by the idea of commonality of a
language
itself, without which they will be apprehensive and unapproachable. To quote an example, it's easier for
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people to
mix
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or
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, because of the close similarity between their languages. It is,
however
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difficult
for them to
mix
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as each side, unless trained and equipped, have very different languages. To recapitulate, it is proven that
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language
of a
country
can not be denied if one wants to understand the grassroots of a nation.
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very beneficial to
mix
with the local crowd and understand their sentiments by speaking to them. There is no shortcut to it.
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